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Poems etc

Post by Randomosity » Tue 25th Sep 2012

Hello!
First of all, if for any reason I am not aloud this topic, or if it's just a c*** idea, just say.
When I came onto this forum, I noticed that indivigual poems had been published, but there isn't a topic for poems, so now I'm starting one. Not massive ballads or anything, just giving it a try sort of thing.
One to start off.
The break between classes
Snide remarks pass by, commenplace,
stifled giggles fall on deaf ears.
Uncoverd sneers lurk from doorways,
hostile eyes watch every move.
Too cowardly to lash out, for if they had,
it would've been met with some defence,
but as it is, through haunted corridors,
Snide remarks pass by, commenplace.
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Post by Falcon! » Wed 28th Nov 2012

Heeey, I was looking for something like this!
Nobody's posted for months, but... Imma bring it back!

Just a rough draft, rhyming is waaay off. But whatever.

Mr. Jones and his marvelous beasts! 
Centaurs and cyborgs and dragons and sphinx!
Folks from France and Spain to see
Mr. Jones and his fabulous beasts!

Mr. Jones and his WONDERFUL beasts! 
Coming right here in to your very own streets!
This may be your only chance to see
Mr. Jones and his fabulous beasts!

Let the showing begin!
You'll be eager to meet
My Wheeler man, King of the streets!
His singular wheel will allow you to boast
Your own wheeler-friend, your new favorite bloke!

Now meet the Centaur, a wonderful thing
A useful and clever and wonderful beast
 He'll protect your lawn! He'll guard your home! 
You can stick him outside with your deer and your gnome!
See the finesse in his skill and his moves, 
His sharp-shooting fingers, his  eyes a deep blue!

Remember the Steve! I don't know his best use,
But thousands of guests he is sure to amuse! 
His four silly legs and gargantuan mouth
Make him, perhaps, the ideal clown!

A circus to buy him! A traveling show!
All of my wares are for sale, you know!
Lets's start him at TWENTY! No? Then at TEN!
How about EIGHT! SEVEN! FIVE?
There aren't any takers? Fine, he stays MINE!

Next up, the Wheeler-man! Man of one wheel!
Make me an offer, I'll make it a deal! 
Can you see him as YOURS, your VERY OWN
To keep and to play with, right there in your home!
Will there be no offers? Then he's yours for FREE! 
No extra requirements! Now extra fee! 
Consider it your personal gift from ME! 
Still no one wants him? Well, I suppose
Things like this happen sometimes, you know!

But next would be the Centaur! He's sure to sell!
He is unmatched in beauty and unmatched in skill!
I was planning on THIRTY, but I'll take him for TEN!
You can buy him and keep him and who knows what then?
Use him as a bodyguard, have him keep the hens! 
I'll take him for FIVE if he won't go for TEN! 
No takers on FIVE? Perhaps THREE or ONE?
Well, what if I sold him for NONE?

ALL  of these wonderful creatures, for FREE!
Even the Steve, who I was keeping for me,
Take them! Take them all if you wish!
It doesn't matter if your poor or rich!
All the customers gone, they've all run away...
Well then! I can try again the next day!

Today, Spain, to morrow, Moscow!
Some one will buy them, somewhere, somehow!
My name will be famous, I'll be rich like a king!
Someday in the future, my tales they will sing!
Of my Steve, a world famous traveling show!
The demand for centaurs will continue to grow!
The Wheeler-man, I'll gift him away 
To a poor little child! A different one every day!

Mr. Jones and his beautiful beasts!
Last call to buy before he leaves!
Say goodbye to the centaurs and cyborgs and sphinx
Mr. Jones and his wonderful beasts!

Mr. Jones and his fabulous beasts!
Leaving today to- to the Russian streets!
With a thousand and one different tricks up his sleeve,
Mr. Jones and our MARVELOUS BEASTS!!

Hmm. Didn't realize it was that... Long... And poorly written... But whatever. It sounds way to Dr. Suess-like for my taste. But whatever.
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Re: Poems etc

Post by Randomosity » Sat 23rd Feb 2013

Oh my God that was brilliant!!! HOW DID YOU DO THAT?!?! I'm serious, you could get that published!
......
:tantrum: Can't think of anything to write now :?
(FAVRIOTE QUOTE)I want to live in a world where chickens can cross the road without their motives being questioned Image
This sigge was made by Sara. THANK YOU!!!
Avvie made by skyswallow. THANK YOU ALSO!!!
There is no freedom, just different levels of bondage
Remember that all opinion is an view about the world. Find a place to stand.
THE SHOW MUST GO ON
Alcohol. the solution- and cause- of all life's problems
ASDF movies are awesome and so are Eddsworld and the TomSka movies. Also Rest In Peace Edd Gould your world will keep on spinning.
COFFEE MAKES THE WORLD GO ROUND!!!
COFFEE IS IN MY SOUL!
COFFEE IS MY SOUL!

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Re: Poems etc

Post by Falcon! » Mon 25th Feb 2013

Really? Omygoshthankyou ;u;

I was trying to sell Lego deformities to my little cousin's Lego millionaire

I have another one I feel like flaunting in hopes that somebody else will post something but anywhat this one I think was stupid but was incredibly well-received on dA

Run-on sentences YEAH!

I'm the Magpie
Who are you?
I'm the soldier,
The guardian
Orchestrating battles
Between Heaven
And Hell
Tell me
Your story
Just maybe
Not all of it
Keep enough
To yourself
To know who
You are
As for me,
I once
Crossed the
Great River Styx,
In hopes that
I might not
Have time to
Return
I twice
Sang a song
Of the finest
Quality
A prayer that
I don't think
Anyone
Heard
I thrice
Met a stranger
And told him
A story
Of the greatest
Heroics
And thoughts
In the land
Since that day,
I dare not
Keep anymore secrets
For fear that
I cannot
Tame it
As it swells.
Never mind,
But never
Forget me,
I beg,
As I lay here forever
And my debts
Are unpaid
Go out
And change
The world
For me
For all of us
In the battle
Of Heaven
And Hell.

Borrowed some ideas from Gus the Theater Cat :3
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