I Owe My Life to An Angel

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I Owe My Life to An Angel

Post by bentj96 » Tue 24th Jul 2012

This is a song (thought it ended up sounding like a poem) I wrote for HaTheAngel. She seemed to be a bit down today, which partly explains this. Please comment... And, yes, she is my angel. :)

Listen to this while you read: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0qU1QPuKLaM

You flew down through all seven heavens,
And rescued me from all eight hells,
You broke my chains and healed my scars,
You suffered the price,
For that, and all,
I owe you life and more,

[Chorus:]
So, I say to you, my angel,
Let me hold you in my arms,
For I will love you until eternity itself ends,
I will cherish your heart of gold,
And I will never forget,
All that you’ve lost.
And I will always remember,
That a heart of gold cannot beat forever.
[Chorus:]

So hear this,
When you fall,
When your heart cannot beat ,
I will catch your broken form,
I will carry you on this bent back,
To the doorstep of heaven I shall go,

So, I say to you, my angel,
Let me hold you in my arms,
For I will love you until eternity itself ends,
I will cherish your heart of gold,
And I will never forget,
All that you’ve lost.
And I will always remember,
That a heart of gold cannot beat forever.

I will climb the tallest mountain,
Swim the wildest river,
Fly the greatest tempest,
And when I reach the end, I will set you down,
And give my life for your own,

My crime will be great,
I will have broken the unbreakable,
Sullied the purest,
Injured the immortal,
Cursed the blessed,
And so, I will wake in the deepest hell,

To reach you, I will stand alone,
In my black armor,
My white blade will strike, and strike and strike,
I will bleed and anguish, fall and break, stand and fight,
And never rest until the Devil himself tastes my blade,

[Chorus]

To the doorstep of heaven I shall go,
Devil’s head in hand,
I will lay my body before the gates,
And await the judgement of the heavens,

If you speak for my heart,
My black armor will wash away,
And I will be your knight in shining armor,

If you speak against my heart,
I will return to the frozen hells,
Where, for you, I will become a god,
The blood upon the stones shall wash away,
The death from the air,
The suffering from the earth,
And seven heavens will become fifteen.

[Chorus]
[Chorus]
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Re: I Owe My Life to An Angel

Post by lackingimagination » Tue 24th Jul 2012

That was... utterly beautiful. Well done.

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