Shuffle Poetry
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Re: Shuffle Poetry
^Danke! Yours sounds pretty awesome, like the start of some sort of Tom Petty song.
You know I can be found
Back in black!
I close my eyes
I'm feeling rough, I'm feeling raw
New York, New York is everything they say
You know I can be found
Back in black!
I close my eyes
I'm feeling rough, I'm feeling raw
New York, New York is everything they say
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Re: Shuffle Poetry
Familiar, why is this so familiar?
What can I do for you?
It is as if everyone dies alone
You can dance
Dreaming
It started off pretty good, but then the last two lines kind of trailed off a little
What can I do for you?
It is as if everyone dies alone
You can dance
Dreaming
It started off pretty good, but then the last two lines kind of trailed off a little
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Re: Shuffle Poetry
I think it adds to the tone. Someone drifting out of consciousness, their thoughts get shorter as their time expires...
Soz, I'm dark xD
Lord I was born a ramblin man
Well I started out down a dirty road
My nem-ah-nem-ah, ooh my nem-ah-nem-ah
Well she was an American girl
I don't want to set the world on fire
(AA, should we skip songs we've already used? I admit, I skipped a couple I know I posted before)
Soz, I'm dark xD
Lord I was born a ramblin man
Well I started out down a dirty road
My nem-ah-nem-ah, ooh my nem-ah-nem-ah
Well she was an American girl
I don't want to set the world on fire
(AA, should we skip songs we've already used? I admit, I skipped a couple I know I posted before)
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^ I'd say use them if you feel like it and skip them if you don't ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ Whatever seems right to ya
These four walls to keep you
I'm up on the edge
Oh no, see you walking round like it's a funeral
Maybe it's the way she walked
I don't have a leg to stand on
This one turned out disconcertingly coherent
These four walls to keep you
I'm up on the edge
Oh no, see you walking round like it's a funeral
Maybe it's the way she walked
I don't have a leg to stand on
This one turned out disconcertingly coherent
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^Vury coherent
Puff the magic dragon, lived by the sea
Out here in the fields
C'est si bon
She grew up ina Indiana town
Picture yourself on a boat on the river
Definitely some things I could say about this....
Puff the magic dragon, lived by the sea
Out here in the fields
C'est si bon
She grew up ina Indiana town
Picture yourself on a boat on the river
Definitely some things I could say about this....
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Pretty sure I forgot I was doing this in between the second and third songs and missed at least one, but I sure can't remember what it was
When I was young I prayed for lightning
I came here for sanctuary
There's a moment
Oh, well imagine
Moving along at a pace unknown to man
When I was young I prayed for lightning
I came here for sanctuary
There's a moment
Oh, well imagine
Moving along at a pace unknown to man
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Re: Shuffle Poetry
Mama take this badge from me
It's not unusual
Makin' my way downtown
Well, he's the king of fashion
Everyday, it's-a getting closer
It's not unusual
Makin' my way downtown
Well, he's the king of fashion
Everyday, it's-a getting closer
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I do a playlist of whatever my 50 favorite songs are at the moment every time the season changes, so these are all taken from my summer 2020 playlist
Got a surprisingly dark one, considering how light 4/5 of these songs are
Tastes like strawberries on a summer evening
I feel that cold wind blow
I never thought that I would find a way out
For all the times that we, we ever were to be
You go sleep with the fishes
Got a surprisingly dark one, considering how light 4/5 of these songs are
Tastes like strawberries on a summer evening
I feel that cold wind blow
I never thought that I would find a way out
For all the times that we, we ever were to be
You go sleep with the fishes
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^Oooh, I likey!!!
Meeting you with a view to a kill
There once was a note
There'll be no strings
You can dance every dance
I'd gladly lose me to find you
Sounds like a bi-polar dude (or dudette) trying to decide if he wants to gank his girlfriend or not.
Possibly a guy that found a suggestive note or text or in some way discovered his SO's infidelity and goes to confront her....perhaps something goes wrong and she accidentally is killed, filling the guy with grief and guilt?
He confronts her, hurt and confused, and she brushes him off, saying there are strings on her and she brazenly struts off...only to be hit by a cliche bus or some such.
¯\_(ツ)_/¯
Meeting you with a view to a kill
There once was a note
There'll be no strings
You can dance every dance
I'd gladly lose me to find you
Sounds like a bi-polar dude (or dudette) trying to decide if he wants to gank his girlfriend or not.
Possibly a guy that found a suggestive note or text or in some way discovered his SO's infidelity and goes to confront her....perhaps something goes wrong and she accidentally is killed, filling the guy with grief and guilt?
He confronts her, hurt and confused, and she brushes him off, saying there are strings on her and she brazenly struts off...only to be hit by a cliche bus or some such.
¯\_(ツ)_/¯
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^Another dark one, wow
Wanted to try something a little different this time since I'd gotten a few of these before, so I took the second line from the second song, third line from the third, etc Ended up with one of my favorites so far
Hey, Mr. DJ, in case you forgot
We're out here chasing a feeling
I think about it night and day
Laisse moi m'enfuir
Shying away
Wanted to try something a little different this time since I'd gotten a few of these before, so I took the second line from the second song, third line from the third, etc Ended up with one of my favorites so far
Hey, Mr. DJ, in case you forgot
We're out here chasing a feeling
I think about it night and day
Laisse moi m'enfuir
Shying away
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^I feel like it's bad I know the last one right off the bat is Take On Me
Sounds like a fun concept!
Take a piece of chalk
Pure and easy
Jeden Tag und jede Nacht
Who are you?
Would it be a sin
Sounds like a fun concept!
Take a piece of chalk
Pure and easy
Jeden Tag und jede Nacht
Who are you?
Would it be a sin
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^ I like that one a lot!!
Wrote out both versions this time, but the first lines only came out better, I think
Just another brain on the campus
Come with me now
I'm running late to somewhere now
We've gone way too fast for way too long
I'm coming apart at the seams
Wrote out both versions this time, but the first lines only came out better, I think
Just another brain on the campus
Come with me now
I'm running late to somewhere now
We've gone way too fast for way too long
I'm coming apart at the seams
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^Yours flows way better than mine, haha
How lucky can one guy be
Maybe, baby, I'll have you
Deep down in Louisiana
Running my rig around 95
Wouldn't it be nice
How lucky can one guy be
Maybe, baby, I'll have you
Deep down in Louisiana
Running my rig around 95
Wouldn't it be nice