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Post by Iris_Cam » Fri 25th Nov 2011

It's not stupid. No more stupider than me iFail.
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I miss my boyfriend...:cry:

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Post by heart_of_gold » Fri 25th Nov 2011

I wish I had a boyfriend. e_e

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Re: Stupid Comments Game

Post by BoboParadizo » Fri 25th Nov 2011

Pfft, who need a boyfriend? I got Edward the sparkly stalker vampire! <333 *keels Edward*

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Post by Felina » Fri 25th Nov 2011

Am I crazy because I think I'm crazy because everyone says me I'm crazy?
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Re: Stupid Comments Game

Post by BoboParadizo » Sat 26th Nov 2011

No, you're crazy because I think that George is dancing outside in the rain. And he puffled. ZOMG!

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Re: Stupid Comments Game

Post by FowlStar » Sat 26th Nov 2011

Bella-Sue: I HAVE A SPARKLY VAMPIRE BOYFRIEND AND YOU DON'T. TAKE THAT!!3121@@!


Me: Yeah, well... I have.... uh... Glittery the sparkling... box of....

glitter.


Yeah. Take that, evil mary sue!


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Post by Iris_Cam » Sat 26th Nov 2011

Bella ain't a Mary Sues coz MS's don't tend to have a personality of a piece of wood(quote from P5's Tumblr).
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Re: Stupid Comments Game

Post by FowlStar » Sat 26th Nov 2011

I disagree. Bella has several defining characteristics of a Mary Sue, dear.

There's several points to prove this, including the fact that she's a shell of a character, which is one of the most VALID reasons she's considered a Mary Sue. The reader can simply step into her shadow, and pretend she herself, or himself, are in involved in some "forbidden love" with a "dangerous vampire". Not to mention the fact that that Mary Sues typically emulate the author themselves (concerning looks and behavioral patterns, as well as origins. More about that later), which is a proven point. I’ll pull up a few wonderful links for you. In the mean time, keep reading.

Let’s start with the definition of a Mary Sue itself.

The most general and widely accepted definition of a Mary Sue is:
...a fictional character with overly idealized and hackneyed mannerisms, lacking noteworthy flaws, and primarily functioning as a wish-fulfillment fantasy for the author or reader. It is generally accepted as a character whose positive aspects overwhelm their other traits until they become one-dimensional.
1. Overly idealized and hackneyed mannerisms: Upon arrival to spoons Forks, Charlie presents her with a car. She immediately exudes an ungrateful attitude, through her unkind thoughts towards her father.

Later, once she starts school, every boy falls in love with her miraculously, and each asks her out to some dance/formal. She’s disgruntled and brushes off the attention, throwing each boy aside and instead preferring to spend her time thinking and mooning after the Sparklepire in the corner.

This is example of a classic mary sue/gary stu relationship.

2. Lacking noteworthy flaws: She has no specific flaws, instead, all other characters regard her with an attitude of almost god-like devotion. This is another typical characteristic of your mary sue. Arguments are that she is a clumsy person, falling everywhere. However, I, and countless others would like to point out that this trait is a “blatant plot device,” to quote the wonderful Frozen Apples Wiki.

For example, SMeyer states that Bella has the tendency to faint at the sight of blood. This is another plot device, as she never faints due to blood every again... even when she’s bitten by James, or especially when, in New Moon, she cuts her arm, severely bleeding.

So, she is a mary sue in that aspect as well.

3. Functioning as a wish-fulfillment fantasy for the author or reader: This is, without a doubt, the characteristic that condemns Bella to Mary sue land.

She is a cardboard cutout of SMeyer herself, exhibiting the exact same facial features and much of the same origins as the author in question.

Bella and SMeyer share facial characteristics, though Bella is decidedly more skinny.
Bella hails from Phoenix, Arizona, SMeyer’s current place of residence.

SMeyer basically put herself in a terribly written story about forbidden romance with a stupid sparklepire. This is exactly what being a mary sue is about. The author is inable to create a three dimensional character with thoughts, feelings, likes, dislikes, habits, looks....

Sure, she states certain things about Bella-sue, BUT, she never SHOWS those traits within Bella sue, such as the aforementioned plot devices.

4. Character whose positive aspects overwhelm their other traits: Bella is always praised, and all of her negative attributes, such as the b*tchy attitude and general selfishness are disregarded. She is thought of as “selfless,” a typical damsel-in-distress type mary sue.

She’s hailed as perfect, utterly so, by the other characters. She has little or no character development, and demonstrates no noteworthy attributes a proper, well done character does (Hermione Granger <3). A MAJOR characteristic of a mary sue.


Point proven. :awesome:

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If you want more info about Mary Sues:

Wikipedia Article
Mary Sues, and How to Stay Away From One
Bella, a Mary Sue?
How to Avoid Mary Sues

And for good measure


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Re: Stupid Comments Game

Post by Felina » Sat 26th Nov 2011

And then they call ME weird...
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Re: Stupid Comments Game

Post by Iris_Cam » Sat 26th Nov 2011

I have to agree. Bella has create a whole new kind of MSes. Maybe we should call them Bella-Sues (i.e, bad traits are plot devices and have personality of chunks of wood- which reminds me: remember what you called the Book in the AWD? A useless pile of woodchips *snicker*). Also, notice the abbreviation of Bella Sue, and come to think of it, Bella Swan.... *cough* BS *cough*

SM obviously didn't think the name through too well. What author gives her MFC a name which innitials stand for bullpoopie?
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Re: Stupid Comments Game

Post by FowlStar » Sat 26th Nov 2011

^^^ THIS.

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Re: Stupid Comments Game

Post by Felina » Sat 26th Nov 2011

I'm eating pizza for lunch
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Re: Stupid Comments Game

Post by heart_of_gold » Sat 26th Nov 2011

This comment will probably be blue.
EDIT: OMG it is.

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Re: Stupid Comments Game

Post by Felina » Sat 26th Nov 2011

^OMdemiG

Where's the point of being normal when weird is awesome?
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